Wow! Revolution by Jennifer Donnelly was fantastique! The writing was superb and you could tell the author had put a lot of thought, research and time into it. A YA Historical Romance, Revoltuion is set in current day New York, it opens with anger and pain and you get a feel for who Andi is right away. Something tragic has happened to her and as the story unfolds you discover why it is she wants to take her life, but you also see the reasons she hasn't. And she's saved by the story of a girl who lived over a hundred years ago in Paris during the French Revolutionary War. Jennifer ties the two worlds together with so many threads. Its a definite must read.
Rated with 4+ stars on Goodreads. To see what others have to say about this book and others visit http://www.goodreads.com/search?utf8=%E2%9C%93&query=Revolution%2FJennifer+Donnelly
Monday, October 29, 2012
Friday, October 12, 2012
How Does This Feel?
For any writer whose agonized over every action, every thought, every word in their manuscript, the frustration of finding these words scrawled on it, "How Does This Feel?" or "How did he feel," or "What did this feel like?" could make anyone want to rend your clothing (okay not literally) I know its an editor's or agent's way to get us to think, to show not tell, but you think to yourself I thought I did.
Recently I was introduced to a wonderful, amazing, fantastic, marvelous, simplistic (too much?) book. I love synonyms and antonyms and instantly fell in love with The Emotion Thesaurus: A Writer's Guide to Character Expression. by Becca Puglisi and Angela Ackerman
In their brief intro, (which I loved for its brevity becuase I wanted to get straight to the meat of the book) they go over the importance of balance, stressing not to rely too heavily on anyone method in your writing, less is more. Emotion, what a wondorous, commanding, sometimes awful sensation. But it is most powerful when both verbal and nonverbal communication is employed. And always consider your setting to create organic and unique emotional responses.
Becca and Angela caution to be wary of these things:
* Backstory = empathy - but don't include too much backstory, it could slow down the
action if not done right.
* Dialogue and thoughts - This as another great way to convey the way a character is
feeling.
* Melodrama - To avoid melodrama recognize emotions run along a contiuum of mild to
extreme and write accordingly
* Cliches - We all know them, find a different way to say "His grin stretched from
ear to ear" or "A single tear pooled in the corner of her eye and then
coursed down her cheek." They've been over used.
* Telling - And of course we've all heard, SHOW DON'T TELL. Which can be so very,
very hard sometimes.
With 75 different emotional descriptions, the authors do a good job of helping us out so we don't have to rely on over used phrases, reactions, and scenes. I highly recommend checking this book out. In my humble opinion, it will only help your writing improve. I know mine has.
Check out the Authors' blog here for more great writing tips or use the link on the side. http://thebookshelfmuse.blogspot.com/p/the-emotion-thesaurus.html
Recently I was introduced to a wonderful, amazing, fantastic, marvelous, simplistic (too much?) book. I love synonyms and antonyms and instantly fell in love with The Emotion Thesaurus: A Writer's Guide to Character Expression. by Becca Puglisi and Angela Ackerman
In their brief intro, (which I loved for its brevity becuase I wanted to get straight to the meat of the book) they go over the importance of balance, stressing not to rely too heavily on anyone method in your writing, less is more. Emotion, what a wondorous, commanding, sometimes awful sensation. But it is most powerful when both verbal and nonverbal communication is employed. And always consider your setting to create organic and unique emotional responses.
Becca and Angela caution to be wary of these things:
* Backstory = empathy - but don't include too much backstory, it could slow down the
action if not done right.
* Dialogue and thoughts - This as another great way to convey the way a character is
feeling.
* Melodrama - To avoid melodrama recognize emotions run along a contiuum of mild to
extreme and write accordingly
* Cliches - We all know them, find a different way to say "His grin stretched from
ear to ear" or "A single tear pooled in the corner of her eye and then
coursed down her cheek." They've been over used.
* Telling - And of course we've all heard, SHOW DON'T TELL. Which can be so very,
very hard sometimes.
With 75 different emotional descriptions, the authors do a good job of helping us out so we don't have to rely on over used phrases, reactions, and scenes. I highly recommend checking this book out. In my humble opinion, it will only help your writing improve. I know mine has.
Check out the Authors' blog here for more great writing tips or use the link on the side. http://thebookshelfmuse.blogspot.com/p/the-emotion-thesaurus.html
Thursday, October 4, 2012
Beyonders: Seeds of Rebellion
So, I've decided to make Thursday my book review day. Maybe someday, I will also put in author interviews and reviews of their books, but for now, I'll keep it simple and just summarize books I've read.
Beyonders: Seeds of Rebellion is a sequel to Brandon Mull's Beyonders: A World Without Heroes, which coincidentally snagged me by the simple paragraph on the dust jacket:
By reading these words you have nominated yourself to recover the key word. Move swiftly. The knowledge you now possess marks you for prompt execution. The first syllable is "A."
Jason, a beyonder from our world is accidentally swallowed by a hippopotamus of all things and sent to an alternate reality, Lyrian, where he's thrust into the role of hero, meeting all sorts of well-crafted characters, one of whom is a beyonder like him as well.
In Seeds of Rebellion, Jason frantically tries to find a way back to his friends, to warn them the word is a fraud and to try to help Rachel return home. Returning the same way Jason came, he's shadowed by a torivor, plagued by nightmares, almost eaten by giants, narrowly escapes from a horde of zombies, and captured by Maldor's conscriptors again. And that's the easy part. At the conclusion Jason's new quest is to find the Seer Darian the Pyromancer without the aid of his most loyal friends.
Brandon is the author of two other series, Fablehaven and the Candy Shop Wars. He is an amazing wordsmith, conjuring a world that takes life on the page, transporting me into it. Through his humor and word magic and peril fraught adventure, I could hardly put it down.
To see a full list of Brandon's work visit brandonmull.com or find him on facebook.
Beyonders: Seeds of Rebellion is a sequel to Brandon Mull's Beyonders: A World Without Heroes, which coincidentally snagged me by the simple paragraph on the dust jacket:
By reading these words you have nominated yourself to recover the key word. Move swiftly. The knowledge you now possess marks you for prompt execution. The first syllable is "A."
Jason, a beyonder from our world is accidentally swallowed by a hippopotamus of all things and sent to an alternate reality, Lyrian, where he's thrust into the role of hero, meeting all sorts of well-crafted characters, one of whom is a beyonder like him as well.
In Seeds of Rebellion, Jason frantically tries to find a way back to his friends, to warn them the word is a fraud and to try to help Rachel return home. Returning the same way Jason came, he's shadowed by a torivor, plagued by nightmares, almost eaten by giants, narrowly escapes from a horde of zombies, and captured by Maldor's conscriptors again. And that's the easy part. At the conclusion Jason's new quest is to find the Seer Darian the Pyromancer without the aid of his most loyal friends.
Brandon is the author of two other series, Fablehaven and the Candy Shop Wars. He is an amazing wordsmith, conjuring a world that takes life on the page, transporting me into it. Through his humor and word magic and peril fraught adventure, I could hardly put it down.
To see a full list of Brandon's work visit brandonmull.com or find him on facebook.
Tuesday, October 2, 2012
Writing Conferences - A Must for Any Serious Writer
This past weekend I attended the annual Montana SCBWI Fall Retreat at the 320 Ranch just past Big Sky. It was a sorely needed, much looked forward to experience.
As always, Michele Corriel, did an amazing job of putting together the event along with help from several others, some of which were Nora Martin and Sharon Glick. Presenters at the conference were Ruta Rimas, Abigail Samoun, Kent Davis and Emma D. Dryden through Skype.
Ruta is an Associate Editor for Atheneum Books for Young Readers and Margaret K McElderry Books, both imprints of Simon & Schuster and gave an amazing breakdown of what makes a book great, giving many examples from Antionette Portis's book "It's Not a Box" to Markus Zusak's "The Book Thief". On top of that I had a great time getting to know her and showing her a bit of Montana on a hike we shared with Abigail and Michele. With less than 20 participants at the conference, one on one time with the editors and agents was easily found.
Abigail Samouns, a new mother who managed to leave her adorable baby boy of only 3 months to come join us, is an agent out of California. She's the founder of Red Fox Literary. Her workshop focused on LESSONS FROM THE MASTERS OF PLOT, which were:
*Lesson 1 - Expectation = Tension
Tie a thread around the reader's finger - pull them along through
your story.
*Lesson 2 - Using familiar architecture to frame your story
Organic structures ie, a single day, spring, a school year.
*Lesson 3 - Three up, three down (Rule of Three)
*Lesson 4 - Hero's worst enemy is YOU! (the author)
Take your mc and make them suffer. Don't be too nice or they won't
grow and develop.
*Lesson 5 - Keep 'em waiting.
Suspense is a great thing, use it.
We also had a SKYPE session with Emma Dryden, founder of Drydenbks. The SKYPE sessions was something new, and although hard at times to hear her, I felt the import of her message. For any writers out there confused about whether or not you should have a web presence, you should. Regardless of your published status. Things I took away from her were, 1)The story matters most, 2)It's never too early to get a presence online, 3)it's important to 'brand' yourself. She literally bombarded us with information, but I felt these were the three most important to me at this time.
Kent Davis, one of our own local Montana SCBWI members, entertained and embarrassed us (not really, it was a lot of fun) with his workshop on Set Them Free: Letting the Characters Do the Work for You. Bringing a lot of his past experiences as an actor, writer, teacher and imrpov comedian he got us up and going, thinking outside of the box so to speak. (It's not a box)
Thank you Michele for everything you do to make these conferences happen and all of you out there need to plan to join us next year. Or find a conference in your area.
Links of interest (copy and paste into browser):
SCBWI Montana Website www.scbwimt.org/index.html
Michele Corriel, Author www.michelecorriel.com/
Sharon Glick, Author/Illustrator http://www.sharonglickart.com/bio.html
Abigail Samouns, Literary Agent www.redfoxliterary.com/
Emma D. Dryden, www.drydenbks.com
320 Guest Ranch, www.320ranch.com
As always, Michele Corriel, did an amazing job of putting together the event along with help from several others, some of which were Nora Martin and Sharon Glick. Presenters at the conference were Ruta Rimas, Abigail Samoun, Kent Davis and Emma D. Dryden through Skype.
Ruta is an Associate Editor for Atheneum Books for Young Readers and Margaret K McElderry Books, both imprints of Simon & Schuster and gave an amazing breakdown of what makes a book great, giving many examples from Antionette Portis's book "It's Not a Box" to Markus Zusak's "The Book Thief". On top of that I had a great time getting to know her and showing her a bit of Montana on a hike we shared with Abigail and Michele. With less than 20 participants at the conference, one on one time with the editors and agents was easily found.
Abigail Samouns, a new mother who managed to leave her adorable baby boy of only 3 months to come join us, is an agent out of California. She's the founder of Red Fox Literary. Her workshop focused on LESSONS FROM THE MASTERS OF PLOT, which were:
*Lesson 1 - Expectation = Tension
Tie a thread around the reader's finger - pull them along through
your story.
*Lesson 2 - Using familiar architecture to frame your story
Organic structures ie, a single day, spring, a school year.
*Lesson 3 - Three up, three down (Rule of Three)
*Lesson 4 - Hero's worst enemy is YOU! (the author)
Take your mc and make them suffer. Don't be too nice or they won't
grow and develop.
*Lesson 5 - Keep 'em waiting.
Suspense is a great thing, use it.
We also had a SKYPE session with Emma Dryden, founder of Drydenbks. The SKYPE sessions was something new, and although hard at times to hear her, I felt the import of her message. For any writers out there confused about whether or not you should have a web presence, you should. Regardless of your published status. Things I took away from her were, 1)The story matters most, 2)It's never too early to get a presence online, 3)it's important to 'brand' yourself. She literally bombarded us with information, but I felt these were the three most important to me at this time.
Kent Davis, one of our own local Montana SCBWI members, entertained and embarrassed us (not really, it was a lot of fun) with his workshop on Set Them Free: Letting the Characters Do the Work for You. Bringing a lot of his past experiences as an actor, writer, teacher and imrpov comedian he got us up and going, thinking outside of the box so to speak. (It's not a box)
Thank you Michele for everything you do to make these conferences happen and all of you out there need to plan to join us next year. Or find a conference in your area.
Links of interest (copy and paste into browser):
SCBWI Montana Website www.scbwimt.org/index.html
Michele Corriel, Author www.michelecorriel.com/
Sharon Glick, Author/Illustrator http://www.sharonglickart.com/bio.html
Abigail Samouns, Literary Agent www.redfoxliterary.com/
Emma D. Dryden, www.drydenbks.com
320 Guest Ranch, www.320ranch.com
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